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       it was as easy to make them laugh
      as to find a vein. (Mine, Then)


If I were looking for a single word to describe Claire Crowther’s work, “edgy” might do. There is a pervasive sense of unease, and nothing that could be called a comfort zone. It is the kind of poetry that keeps you on the alert, reading with your mind fully focused, because at any moment an unexpected line break or double meaning can jolt you out of what you thought was the path you were following:


       If two atoms


       share an electron and bond in one body
      in one compass-
      ion of matter swaying with so much co-
      incidence direct-


       ionless as the atoms (The Physics of Coincidence)


Even a poem that ends upbeat, like “Snow at Christmas”, creates along the way this frisson of danger:


       I’ve thought of snow as a raptor that seizes
       holly,
       ivy, all the evergreens, a dog that bites
       a child
       near the eye.


The other characteristic, for me, that stands out in her poems is their verbal inventiveness. Sometimes this is (almost) purely playful, like the ship’s foghorn that goes “ohhhm, ohhhm” (from Solar Cruise), but most of the time her wordplay is as deadly serious as that of George Herbert, pointing to relationships between not just words but the things they stand for. This verbal dexterity was perhaps never more evident than in the collection A Pair of Three, which chronicled the experience of being married to a person previously widowed and whose former partner is still felt as s presence in the marriage:


       It’s late. No, partner, not too late. Still
           one of us is late:


Her verbal coinages in that collection, like “werhusband”, and her figuring of the relationship in games with the lexis of grammar, were often technically dazzling, but never devoid of feeling. The same technical ability shows in the sureness of her line. “Dive, I did, I dived and did I land”, from “The Needles, Isle of Wight” may look convoluted on the page, but read it aloud and its rhythms are instinctive. The sound-patterns in


       Scrape the ditch that fits Hob’s Moat
      to Hatchford Brook. Look through oak roots (Lost Child)


are so ingrained and unobtrusive, they could be missed on a sight-reading; this is a poet who really repays being read aloud.


Crowther is sometimes seen as a “difficult” poet. Mostly this means no more than that reading her work requires concentration and intelligence. But now and then, it’s a question of trying to read her imagery as she does, and I must confess that I have not yet got my head around the “Lady Lear” poems in the final section, because I’m not sure what the figure of “Lady Lear” is doing or representing, though I am fairly sure she isn’t just a female version of King Lear. Several of the non-Lear poems in this section, like “Is Stepping Out Dying or Being Born?”. “Last Supper” and “A Covert Bird”, seem to revolve around the word “shy”, and I think that might end up being an easier way into them.


The other word that often occurs to me when reading this poet is “ambitious”.  The sheer daring, as well as inventiveness, in the central image of Solar Cruise: a cruise on which poet and physicist are partners and passengers and where the physicist seems to be trying to convert his fellow passengers on the SS Eschatology (a ship of fools? An ark?) to the concept of solar energy. Her willingness to use quite specialised, sometimes arcane, vocabularies: that of physics in Solar Cruise; that of grammar in A Pair of Three. Her way of constantly pushing words, images, meanings beyond where you thought they were going: to the edge, in fact. Often exhilarating, occasionally baffling, never predictable, never dull.

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     I wonder about the singularity
    of a pair of three –
    an us.


Claire Crowther has in the past sometimes been seen as, if not exactly a “difficult” or “obscure” poet, at least a determinedly cerebral one, not afraid to use vocabularies that don’t often feature in poetry (like that of physics in her collection Solar Cruise) and always demanding thought and concentration (amply repaid) from her reader. As we shall see, her technical and verbal skills are just as much in evidence here, but this collection’s focus is one that is perhaps more immediately accessible; the experience of being married to a person previously widowed. A marriage in which, pace the late Diana, there genuinely are three people:


     It’s late. No, partner, not too late. Still
    one of us is late: (A Pair of Three)


The pun on “late” is classic Crowther, as is the happy coinage “werhusband” in another poem. In “Case Endings” she uses the lexis of grammar to ponder this complicated relationship:

   Could he/I/she be subjunctive?
   wouldwife couldwife

   Do ‘we’ have the present and/or the past?
   triplecouple oncecouple doublecouple

   Is every ending right?
   wo/man wer/once

   Can ‘I’ be objective about ‘them’…?
   foundwife lostwife

 Is this ending right for ‘us’…?
 wefinders wekeepers


And in “The Physics of Coincidence” she uses line breaks to jolt the reader into thinking:

 If two atoms

 share an electron and bond in one body
 in one compass-
 ion of matter swaying with so much co-
 incidence direct-

 ionless as the atoms


But alongside this intellectual (though far from dispassionate) wordplay goes a far more direct and emotional response, for instance, in “Over”, to the sheer implausibility of death, the difficulty in believing that it can have impinged on ordinary life:


  How could she lie so quiet
 when she had mending to do?

 How could he search for a vase
 while she made him a widower?


And her technical ability never shows so clearly as when she expresses the feeling of another’s presence in that simplest-looking and most vernacular of all forms, the ballad. No form looks so easy to write; none is so easy to write badly. In “The Visitor”,


   While he was out I read a book.
  I had to rest that day.
  Then I heard a key in the lock
  and steps in the hallway


the tension begins with the pinpoint rhythms of those third and fourth lines and ratchets up throughout.


If this review begins to resemble a series of quotes, that is because it is very hard to express an idea in more telling words than those Crowther uses.

  Must we all leave
  down the line lyrical lying where we will? (Illyria by Rail).


“And what should I do in Illyria”, indeed… This is one of those collections that, because of the universality of its subject matter, speaks immediately to the reader. But at the same time, said reader recognises the presence of a powerful intellect and a depth of meaning that does not yield itself at a first reading.



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